Last week we were focusing on poetry and for poetry, I made two poems. A colour poem and a feeling poem, a feeling poem is a poem about a type of feeling and a colour poem is describing a colour. I Did navy and sadness.
Hi Ruiha, I read your two poems and I thought that they were pretty amazing! You have added so many complex adjectives and I like how a few lines rhymed. Good job, Garnet.
Hi Ruiha,
ReplyDeleteI read your two poems and I thought that they were pretty amazing! You have added so many complex adjectives and I like how a few lines rhymed.
Good job, Garnet.
Hey garnet,
DeleteThanks for reading my poems! Love the feedback, which out of the two do you like best?
Hi!
DeleteI would probably choose the Sadness poem because it was the most descriptive. What is your favourite??
To be very honest I like the sadness poem, it wasn't as easy to write but the outcome was great!
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